Wednesday, October 29, 2025

Cold case killer

Rain pelted the streets of Chicago like a thousand tiny hammers, bouncing off cracked sidewalks and streaking down neon-lit alleyways. Detective Marcus Kane lit a cigarette under the flickering sign of a closed diner. He was forty-six, thirty years on the force, and the kind of man who didn’t sleep well because the ghosts of the dead had a way of finding you in the quiet hours.

And tonight, the ghosts were restless.

“Marcus.” The voice crackled through his phone. Officer Lenny Brice, rookie, sharp-eyed but nervous.

“What is it?” Kane flicked ash into the puddle at his feet.

“Another one. Same as… you know… the old case.”

Kane’s jaw tightened. His hand went to his trench coat pocket, fingers brushing the silver badge he’d carried for more than twenty years. He didn’t speak for a moment. He just listened to the rain.

“Where?” Kane finally asked, voice low.

“West Side. Alley behind Frankie’s Bar. You better sit down for this one.”

By the time he arrived, yellow police tape cut the rain into sections. The body lay face down, soaked through, arms splayed unnaturally. Kane crouched beside it. A faint smile touched his lips, grim and bitter. He recognized the signature, the twisted curl of the killer’s hallmark.

“Jesus Christ,” Brice whispered, unable to meet his gaze.

“Yeah,” Kane said. “It’s him. He’s back.”

 * * * * * * * * * *

Two days earlier, Kane had been staring at a wall of files in the precinct basement, each one a reminder of failure. The cold case, the one that had almost ended his career and destroyed his personal life haunted him. Three young women, all strangled in the same methodical way, their bodies staged in eerily symbolic poses. He had chased leads, interrogated suspects, and dug through every dead-end alley in the city. And then… nothing.

Now, years later, the killer was back, leaving a breadcrumb trail of terror that read like a manuscript of revenge.

“Brice,” Kane said, crouching beside the body, “look at this.” He pointed to a small red ribbon tied around the victim’s wrist. Identical to the ribbons from the old case. “Every detail. Same. Just… meaner.”

Brice swallowed hard. “He ...he’s smarter now.”

“He’s always been smart,” Kane muttered. His eyes scanned the alley, restless, always calculating. He could feel the pulse of the city, the rhythm of footsteps, the whisper of movement behind doors. Danger was close, and the killer knew it.

* * * * * * * * * *

That night, Kane went hunting. Not with a gun, not with a badge, he went with instincts honed over decades. He walked the alleys, his trench coat wet, the brim of his hat shielding his eyes. He followed the pattern: West Side, Near North, abandoned factories. He didn’t speak to anyone, just observed, listened, smelled the city like a predator reading the scent of prey.

He spotted a man ahead, tall, shadowed by the fog. Kane slowed, instinct coiling in his gut. The man moved too smoothly, too carefully, leaving nothing to chance.

“Detective Kane,” the man said, voice low and controlled. “We’ve been expecting you.”

Kane’s hand moved to his gun but the man was already stepping into the light. The face was new, but the eyes were cold, calculating. Kane knew the eyes from the case files, from the nightmares that had kept him awake for years. The original killer or someone who had learned the craft perfectly.

“You,” Kane said. His voice was a blade. “I thought I buried you.”

The man tilted his head. “You didn’t. You failed.”

Without warning, he lunged. Kane sidestepped, grabbing a nearby trash can lid to block a knife. Sparks flew as metal clanged. Kane kicked, the man staggered, but recovered. They danced through the alley, rain slick, each move deadly precise. Kane’s years of experience met raw, almost inhuman cunning.

“You’re good,” Kane said, breathing hard. “Too good.”

“And you?” the killer hissed. “Still chasing ghosts?”

* * * * * * * * * *

The fight spilled into an abandoned warehouse. Boxes toppled, metal creaked underfoot, rainwater dripping through broken skylights. Kane pulled the man into a grapple, twisting, forcing him to the ground. They rolled, each punch, each strike a rhythm of survival. Kane finally slammed the killer against a rusted pipe, gun drawn, finger trembling on the trigger.

“End of the line,” Kane growled.

The killer smiled. “You think this is the end? You don’t understand. You never understood.” He lunged again. Kane fired, not once, but twice, bullets finding their mark in the chest. The man collapsed, breathing ragged, eyes wide in disbelief.

Kane knelt, cuffing him, heart still hammering. “It ends tonight.”

The man coughed, blood mixing with rain. “Maybe… in your world.” His lips twisted into a final, mocking smile before the darkness took him.

* * * * * * * * * *

Morning came. Kane stood outside the precinct, watching the city wake. The rain had stopped, leaving the streets gleaming, reflective, as if nothing had happened. He lit a cigarette, inhaled deep, feeling the weight lift just enough. Another case closed. Another ghost put to rest.

But the city whispered around him, alive, full of stories yet untold. Kane exhaled smoke into the cold morning air, trench coat flapping against the wind.

“You did good, Marcus,” Brice said, approaching.

“I did what I had to,” Kane said. His voice was low, tired, satisfied. “And if he ever comes back… we’ll be ready.”

He flicked the cigarette, crushed it under his boot, and walked into the rising sun, a man who had faced death, danced with it, and survived. The case was closed. The city would sleep easier tonight but Kane never really slept. Ghosts were patient.

And so was he.

The End

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